4thWall logo reboot mockup

I’d like to reboot our 4thWall logo (Note: Now replaced by the Awareon logo). I’m pretty set on a 3D logo of some sort, so I can place it directly into our game-world. I’ve sold myself on this new concept, I like it a lot better than my previous pseudo-3D Photoshop hack (which wasn’t meant to stick as a logo, but hey you work with what you have, right?).

Here’s a quick mockup I just did in SketchUp, to demonstrate the style I’m considering. I’m no graphics artist by any stretch, so I’d appreciate any criticism and suggestions. I’d like to hear what you think.

Ignore the extra orientation lines from SketchUp (I should have hidden those for the video clip, but I did just throw this together).

The font used is Colaborate by Carrois Type Design: http://www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/Colaborate or http://www.carrois.com/download.html

Here are a series of videos showing my progression on the logo mockup: